Thursday, January 21, 2010

Equalization 2

Anchored in the cove
The boat is trim and ready
Come aboard, let’s go

3 comments:

  1. I think this is one of your best, Ron. It is simple, precise and clear, with lots of description distilled into those few words. It has emphasised to me how important life experience is for appreciating haikus. Each word needs to ring a bell. Readers / listeners need memories before they can hear them ring.

    Lucy

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  2. Oh,my. Thank you, Lucy. Appreciate your perception.

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  3. Really nice. Especially the trim part. "Nice and safe in the sanctuary of the cove, the boat is all balanced and stable, and we are welcome to this peace this safety" .. Newton
    It makes me feel really good just sitting here considering this image/feeling you have created in my mind.
    Thank You
    Ron

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